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		<title>Hiatus</title>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 01 Mar 2008 04:11:12 +0000</pubDate>
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Two events have occurred: I&#8217;ve taken a new job (minor), and my mother has become very, very ill (major). I won&#8217;t be around for a bit until the dust settles here. I&#8217;ll post when I can, but at the moment, I have to spend my time and thought elsewhere.
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<p>Two events have occurred: I&#8217;ve taken a new job (minor), and my mother has become very, very ill (major). I won&#8217;t be around for a bit until the dust settles here. I&#8217;ll post when I can, but at the moment, I have to spend my time and thought elsewhere.</p>
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		<title>Characterization Through Another&#8217;s Eyes</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 21 Jan 2008 00:43:02 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[I just started reading a couple of Rex Stout&#8217;s Nero Wolfe books. One thing stands out: the way Stout&#8217;s narrator, Archie Goodwin, becomes the window through which we see Nero Wolfe and how effectively Stout portrays Wolfe through that window.
(For the purposes of this post, the one book I&#8217;ve finished so far was called &#8220;Might [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<div class='snap_preview'><br /><p>I just started reading a couple of Rex Stout&#8217;s Nero Wolfe books. One thing stands out: the way Stout&#8217;s narrator, Archie Goodwin, becomes the window through which we see Nero Wolfe and how effectively Stout portrays Wolfe through that window.</p>
<p>(For the purposes of this post, the one book I&#8217;ve finished so far was called &#8220;Might as Well Be Dead.&#8221;)</p>
<p>Nero does some of his own portraying; that is, Archie reports conversations and actions of Nero&#8217;s that he himself witnesses. But a lot of the characterization of Wolfe comes from Goodwin himself. Examples:</p>
<p>1) In this book, at one point a cardinal house rule is violated (Nero has a lot of house rules). Goodwin characterizes him by predicting three possible reactions on Nero&#8217;s part &#8212; and since Goodwin knows him very well, one presumes they&#8217;re all reactions that are steeped in likelihood. Now, Nero reacts a fourth way, and it makes sense &#8212; but Stout&#8217;s purpose of elucidating Wolfe&#8217;s character via the predictions is accomplished.  Goodwin does this sort of speculation on Wolfe&#8217;s motives several times in this book, and each of the speculations reveals something about Wolfe&#8217;s character.</p>
<p>2) Goodwin points out when Wolfe is playing a role versus being himself. In one scene in the book (actually the same scene as the one in the above example), Wolfe buys time to think and creates anticipation in his listeners by filling pots in his orchid room. Goodwin points out that the action is totally fake: a key step in the filling has been omitted. Now, there are two dynamics at work here. The first is that he&#8217;s characterizing Wolfe by outlining both the lie and the truth in his behavior. The second deserves it&#8217;s own paragraph, thus:</p>
<p>3) He&#8217;s portraying himself, Goodwin, as knowing Wolfe&#8217;s habits well enough to be able to spot fakery &#8212; and if he knows him that well (the reader says to himself), well, he must know what he&#8217;s talking about and the reader should believe him. In other words, Goodwin is establishing himself as an authority on Wolfe. He does this throughout, in many ways &#8212; for example, even when Wolfe says something brilliant or surprising, Goodwin seems to expect it &#8212; he knows Wolfe well enough not to be surprised  by him.</p>
<p>4) Goodwin makes frequent references to Wolfe&#8217;s appearance, habits, likes, dislikes, and thought processes.</p>
<p>5) Goodwin has set his own life up, in many ways, as an accommodation of Wolfe&#8217;s mandates and limitations &#8212; this tells the reader that Wolfe&#8217;s is a powerful personality and, also, that there must be some strong payoff for Goodwin to do this. It also keeps the reader&#8217;s eye squarely on the ball: the temptation is to think of the narrator of any work as being the main character. Well, if you want to think Archie Goodwin is the main character, fine, but Stout won&#8217;t let you lose sight of the fact that Goodwin thinks <b><i>Wolfe</i></b> is the main character.</p>
<p>6) Goodwin talks about Wolfe&#8217;s probable reactions to hypothetical situations &#8212; say, the idea of having a woman in his life.  Now, Wolfe does not actually have a woman in his life &#8212; but Goodwin knows how he&#8217;d feel about it.</p>
<p>And so on. Now, a main method of characterizing a fictional persona is via the reactions of others to the character. Stout is a good example because it is an extreme example &#8212; the main character is seen <i>exclusively</i> through the eyes of the narrator, who either comments on him or reports things that occur involving him, over numerous books.  Stout died more than 30 years ago and his books are still in print. He must have gotten it right.</p>
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		<title>Editing is a Juggling Act</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 24 Dec 2007 05:18:31 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[I&#8217;ve recently undertaken a couple of nonfiction editing jobs, which, of course, have brought everything that goes into editing back into focus. Editing isn&#8217;t one job: it&#8217;s a number of jobs that can&#8217;t necessarily be done all at once. Here are a few of them, from micro- to macroscopic.
1)  Typos. What&#8217;s misspelled, or spelled [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<div class='snap_preview'><br /><p>I&#8217;ve recently undertaken a couple of nonfiction editing jobs, which, of course, have brought everything that goes into editing back into focus. Editing isn&#8217;t one job: it&#8217;s a number of jobs that can&#8217;t necessarily be done all at once. Here are a few of them, from micro- to macroscopic.</p>
<p>1)  Typos. What&#8217;s misspelled, or spelled correctly but misused &#8212; like &#8220;roll&#8221; for &#8220;role,&#8221; or &#8220;there&#8221; or &#8220;they&#8217;re&#8221; when you actually meant &#8220;their.&#8221;</p>
<p>2 ) Grammatical errors. And by God, police yourself out of things I see in published works all the time, like subject-pronoun agreement (the worst is using &#8220;their&#8221; when the correct word would be &#8220;his&#8221; or &#8220;her&#8221; &#8212; if you can&#8217;t get around that with a singular subject, make the whole damned sentence plural!) The other especially annoying one is &#8212; and yes, book editors miss this one a lot &#8212; using &#8220;of&#8221; when it should be &#8220;have&#8221; as in &#8220;would of&#8221; when it should be &#8220;would have.&#8221; YIKES!</p>
<p>3) Wrong word errors. Now, first of all, make sure you know what every word you write actually means. If you stop and think about it, you&#8217;ll be amazed at how many words it&#8217;s easy to use fairly correctly but if someone actually pins you down about the meaning, you have a hard time articulating it. (Ok, define irony. Define fortuitous. Define pragmatic. Define paradigm. Define catholic. Define hopefully &#8212; not the colloquial, misused meaning, but what it actually means. Define presently &#8212; and which definition is the preferred usage, as opposed to the one people use a lot mistakenly?) And never use &#8220;over&#8221; when you mean &#8220;more than,&#8221; &#8220;less&#8221; when you mean &#8220;fewer,&#8221; &#8220;since&#8221; when you mean &#8220;because&#8221; or &#8220;as,&#8221; &#8220;centered around&#8221; when it should be &#8220;centered on.&#8221; Amateur mistakes, all.</p>
<p>4) Vagueness. Two particulars, here &#8212; first, non-specific language (like using the word &#8220;thing&#8221; all the time, or describing something as &#8220;nice&#8221; in your exposition. Characters talking to each other &#8212; well, that&#8217;s different, because people say &#8220;thing&#8221; and &#8220;nice&#8221; all the time. But in the expos &#8211;no.) And the second is weakening qualifiers (kind of, rather, quite, very). Those are used quite often, very annoyingly, and I&#8217;m rather irritated and kind of tired of seeing sloppy editing that leaves those phrases behind.</p>
<p>5) Stylistic mistakes  &#8212; by these I mean things like &#8220;there is&#8221; or &#8220;there are&#8221; constructions, which weaken writing, or using passive voice when active is better.</p>
<p>6) Point of view errors &#8212; if you start a paragraph in one character&#8217;s head,  you better almost always end up there, and you better not have him know things he can&#8217;t possibly know &#8212; like what someone else is thinking if the someone else hasn&#8217;t voiced it, or what someone else&#8217;s motive is for doing things when the motive hasn&#8217;t been voiced either.  Here&#8217;s a point of view error with commentary: &#8220;I watched him <font color="#ff0000">[we've established we're in my head]</font>. He stood there <font color="#ff0000">[so far, so good, I can observe and know that without being told]</font> silently. Suddenly he turned, afraid <font color="#ff0000">[trouble!  How can I know that,</font> <font color="#ff0000">based on what I've already revealed?]</font>. He thought I was going to kill him <font color="#ff0000">[uh, i'm a mind-reader now?]</font>. I admit, the thought was crossing my mind <font color="#ff0000">[now I'm back in my own</font> <font color="#ff0000">head, but the reader is getting seasick]</font>. He was trying desperately to figure out how to distract me and make me move from between him and the door <font color="#ff0000">[but since I'm reading his mind again, I know better, don't I?]</font> .  Avoiding point-of-view errors is why you often see &#8220;he <u>seemed</u> to be considering&#8221; or &#8220;she <u>appeared</u> to blah blah blah&#8221; or &#8220;he <u>sounded</u>&#8221; or &#8220;she <u>looked</u>,&#8221; because if you&#8217;re writing in anything other than third-person omniscient (and even then, a good bit of the time), you can&#8217;t know what someone else is thinking or feeling, you can only know what they&#8217;re displaying for the world to observe, and your own reactions to it.</p>
<p>7) Consistency errors. Susie has a red hat on page 7 but on page 30 it&#8217;s suddenly indigo. Or Susie&#8217;s name is spelled Susie on page 1 but Suzie on page 25. Or Mark and Susie&#8217;s first date is in springtime and they become inseparable immediately, but date 3 (which presumably takes place the same week) is spent out looking at the leaves changing color. Or your character is pregnant for 58 weeks, once you&#8217;ve added up all the time that&#8217;s gone by. And it doesn&#8217;t have to be internal inconsistency either &#8212; it can be inconsistent with your audience&#8217;s understanding of how the world works. For example, if your character is a 12-year-old and it&#8217;s October, the kid better be in school. If you have him out doing other stuff all the time and it&#8217;s not a weekend or after school or otherwise explained, you&#8217;ve screwed up in the eyes of your reader. Other inconsistencies arise out of errors of fact or anachronism &#8212; putting the First World War in the 1920s,  or having a character using a microwave oven in 1949.</p>
<p>8 ) Character-development errors. If by the end of your work, your character&#8217;s actions don&#8217;t seem inevitable based on what your reader has learned about your character, you&#8217;ve dropped the ball. People don&#8217;t act out of a vacuum &#8212; they have pasts that shape their presents and actions. Your characters are motivated by the goals they&#8217;re trying to achieve that form the center of the story, but how they approach them and why those goals are important to them arise out of their pasts, histories, and natures.</p>
<p>9) Time-on-stage errors &#8212; did you leave subplots undeveloped throughout and suddenly pop them in to resolve them at the end? Did your main story line take a back seat to what should have been a subplot? Do you have characters who are important to the story but who aren&#8217;t seen enough? Or unimportant characters who spend too much time out there?</p>
<p>10) Too much exposition, not enough dialogue. Pick up books like the one you&#8217;re writing and thumb through them. Look at the ratio of dialogue to expos. Think about your own work in comparison.</p>
<p>12) Unanswered questions &#8212; all your little mysteries either have to be resolved, or closed in such a way that the reader understands a sequel is forthcoming.</p>
<p>13) Writing that assumes the reader knows more than you&#8217;ve told him.  This is especially troublesome in nonfiction writing &#8212; you&#8217;re putzing along writing about how to knit, and you suddenly say, &#8220;having determined that you need a 9-gauge needle&#8221; and your reader thinks, &#8220;wait a minute, how did I determine that?&#8221;  You haven&#8217;t put all the knowledge the audience needs down on paper &#8212; and this is easy to miss, because you already have the knowledge, so you aren&#8217;t going to experience the hole in the writing the same way your less-knowledgeable audience will.</p>
<p>14) Big picture errors.  You wanted to make a certain thematic point but too many elements of your story lean in a different direction. Or the entire work is funny and lighthearted and then on page 297, it suddenly goes black. Or your characters fail to react appropriately to something serious when the reaction is called for. Or you spend 200 pages building up to something and then, when you finally reveal it, you do so in a way that doesn&#8217;t merit the 200-page build-up. (Like, you spend 200 pages FINALLY getting your heroine to MEET the guy she&#8217;s been fantasizing about all this time, and then, on page 201, without even talking about how the meeting went, you say &#8220;and then they got married. The end.&#8221;) Now, I&#8217;m not saying that variations of this kind of thing can&#8217;t work, but you better know what you&#8217;re doing. And if it doesn&#8217;t work, you&#8217;d better be ruthless about undoing it.</p>
<p>Well, that&#8217;s a start. I&#8217;m sure I&#8217;ll think of other things to edit for, and we&#8217;ll get to them all in time.</p>
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		<title>Off the Wagon Bigtime</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 24 Dec 2007 04:27:27 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Ok, so we went out of town over Thanksgiving and then I got embroiled in a big project and I haven&#8217;t written a word in over a month &#8212; not on the novel, anyway, although I&#8217;ve written a freelance article for the DBNJ and so forth. But I will get back on that horse.
In the [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<div class='snap_preview'><br /><p>Ok, so we went out of town over Thanksgiving and then I got embroiled in a big project and I haven&#8217;t written a word in over a month &#8212; not on the novel, anyway, although I&#8217;ve written a freelance article for the DBNJ and so forth. But I <b>will</b> get back on that horse.</p>
<p>In the meantime, have happy and productive holidays &#8212; the kind writers&#8217; dreams are made of!</p>
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		<title>Arcs</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 04 Dec 2007 02:10:06 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[I&#8217;m winging it here, so bear with. I got asked about story arcs and it&#8217;s not a simple question.
The common definition is that the story arc is the trajectory of the plot. It starts out &#8220;low to the ground&#8221; at the beginning and rises with every tension-building event until you hit the climax or high [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<div class='snap_preview'><br /><p>I&#8217;m winging it here, so bear with. I got asked about story arcs and it&#8217;s not a simple question.</p>
<p>The common definition is that the story arc is the trajectory of the plot. It starts out &#8220;low to the ground&#8221; at the beginning and rises with every tension-building event until you hit the climax or high point, and then drops back down like unto falling off a cliff. So you get a sort of uneven drawing of a mountain. I say uneven, because the coming down from the climax doesn&#8217;t (or shouldn&#8217;t) take as long or encompass nearly as many events as it took to get to the peak in the first place. So the initial climb is gradual, but the trip down the far side is precipitous.</p>
<p>That being said, here&#8217;s the complicator &#8212; stories have more than one arc, because any subplot that results in a resolution has an arc. Characters also have arcs.</p>
<p>Let&#8217;s consider a couple of examples. Works that provoke fear are good examples because effective works of horror fiction scare the bejesus out of you, and you vividly feel each ratcheting up of the tension. You know when you&#8217;re climbing that arc, emotionally, and you know when you&#8217;ve crossed to the other side &#8212; because you can suddenly breathe again.</p>
<p>Let&#8217;s look at the stereotypical horror story &#8212; lonely traveler stranded, goes to eerie house (whose eeriness is obvious to everyone except the hapless hero), (tension rising) gets taken in, hints dropped left and right about the host&#8217;s true intentions, (more tension rising) and then comes that long long walk up that dark steep staircase symbolizing the helpless captive&#8217;s being removed farther and farther from any hope of escape. By now, even our hapless idiot has begun to cotton onto the fact that something isn&#8217;t quite right, and that ratchets our tension up farther. Then come the near misses (more tension) and the inevitable confrontation between hapless hero and evil creature. Now, your imaginary arc line has climbed and climbed and here, it&#8217;s at its highest point. Resolution occurs (good wins) and the next scene shows how vastly different &#8212; ordinary, even &#8212;  the scary old place looks in the daylight, with all threat of danger past and calmness reigning supreme. (Here, the story line drops precipitously.)</p>
<p>Now, let&#8217;s consider the arcs in something more complicated. How about &#8220;To Kill a Mockingbird&#8221;?</p>
<p>The story has several arcs, all of which interweave, and several character arcs, likewise. Scout&#8217;s and Jem&#8217;s arcs &#8212; the main story arc &#8212; concern growing up and are mostly visible when you contrast their various experiences/opinions of Boo Radley &#8212; Boo goes from being a ghostly, mythical, scary figure to being a neighbor: lonely, scared, human, and, ultimately, good. That arc&#8217;s climax comes when Boo saves the children from  Bob Ewell.  But you can see other parts of the &#8220;growing up&#8221; arc elsewhere &#8212; in what the children learn about living decent good lives from observing their father, in what they see about walking in other&#8217;s shoes when they interact with Mrs. Debose, in Scout&#8217;s initial impatience with the Cunninghams and her later reaching out to Mr. Cunningham and defusing a tense moment thereby. Each of these incidents shows progress, leading up to the climax of progress &#8212; the transformation of Boo in their eyes. (By the way, I&#8217;ve been drawing from the book up to now, but the movie is wonderful too. If you haven&#8217;t watched it in awhile, go get it. Boo Radley is Robert Duvall&#8217;s first role, and he has no lines whatsoever, and yet he conveys that poor scared man beautifully&#8230;)</p>
<p>But there are others. Atticus has a character arc &#8212; he is tested when he is challenged to defend Tom Robinson and knows he must do so, even at what turns out to be great risk to himself and his children. He meets this challenge, and follows it through to its tragic conclusion. Tom Robinson has a character arc &#8212; a good man, wrongly accused, who loses at trial and is killed trying to escape.</p>
<p>The story of the Robinson trial is a subplot whose arc spins into the children&#8217;s larger arc. You think that arc is finished &#8212; the trial is over, Tom Robinson is dead &#8212; but yet, that subplot becomes the catalyst for the main arc&#8217;s climax, when the resentful Bob Ewell tries to harm Scout and Jem, and Boo Radley saves their lives. (Many sources say subplots should be resolved just before the main climax, and here is an example of it being done profoundly well, because it&#8217;s not only resolved, it ties in and feeds the main climax.)</p>
<p>Scenes often have arcs, also. Think about Rear Window, for example &#8212; in one scene, Grace Kelly goes to Thorwald&#8217;s apartment to get evidence. There is tension because the threat of getting caught hangs over her head, and if she does get caught, Jimmy Stewart isn&#8217;t going to be able to help her because he&#8217;s sitting in a wheelchair with a broken leg. She breaks in, she searches around, she finds something &#8212; but Thorwald is coming back. Tension rises. He comes in and confronts her &#8212; huge tension, huge danger &#8212; and just as it looks like she might be able to talk her way out of it, we see Thorwald noticing the evidence she&#8217;s found &#8212; his murdered wife&#8217;s wedding ring. More tension. He menaces her &#8212; poor Jimmy is in absolute panic. Then, at the last possible moment, the cops come in and save her (well, actually, they&#8217;re arresting her for burglary, but the result is the same). Climbing, climbing, tension, climax, drop. Time to breathe again.</p>
<p>Another example, this one from Gone with the Wind. Scarlett takes the ill Melanie, her newborn baby, Scarlett&#8217;s whiny son Wade and her equally whiny maid Prissy and tries to make her way home through two armies in a wagon pulled by a stolen horse.  All she wants on earth is to get home. She wants her mother. She wants someone else to help her bear some of the burdens that have been dumped on her because she is the strongest person in her circle. The tension mounts throughout the trip &#8212; Atlanta burns. They&#8217;re in frequent danger of being caught by one or the other of the armies, and the horse confiscated. Melanie is deathly ill. Rhett abandons them. They are getting hungrier and hungrier. Every place they pass on their way home has been burned to the ground, and they have NO reason to think Tara will have been treated otherwise. Then they turn the corner, and, a miracle &#8212; Tara still stands. Breeeaaathe. (But it&#8217;s a false relief, for Scarlet&#8217;s mother lies dead inside, and her life gets anything but easier.)</p>
<p>A writer should be able to plot out, on paper, the rising tension points, the climax, and the precipitous drop, for the story-at-large, and for the subplots. It&#8217;s a good way to check to make sure your main story isn&#8217;t being overwhelmed by a subplot &#8212; sometimes you may discover that what you think is a subplot actually has star billing, and this will cause you to do some rethinking. You should think about your character arcs, also &#8212; a character arc is just another way of looking at character development, and if your characters don&#8217;t grow and change, your story is missing something essential. And while you&#8217;re looking at your subplot arcs, see if you can find ways in which they add to your main story arc &#8212; as they did in the TKAM example.</p>
<p>Happy climbing!</p>
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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<div class='snap_preview'><br /><p>Exciting things are happening with my friend Deb’s blog, <a href="http://www.bucknakedpolitics.typepad.com/" title="Buck Naked Politics" target="_blank">BuckNaked Politics</a>. Reuters has picked up some of her posts in toto (even the illustrations!) and she’s even been linked by the Wall Street Journal!  She’s meticulous in her research, and it shows — she deserves the notice she’s getting. Check her out!</p>
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		<title>Come On Baby, Let&#8217;s Do the Twist!</title>
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		<pubDate>Sun, 04 Nov 2007 02:42:09 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[I got asked recently about plot twists. I&#8217;ve been thinking about them since, and here is what I&#8217;ve come up with.
At its simplest, a plot twist is something happening that the audience doesn&#8217;t expect.
A truly effective twist has to be two things:  1) unexpected and 2) still in keeping with your characters. It should [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<div class='snap_preview'><br /><p>I got asked recently about plot twists. I&#8217;ve been thinking about them since, and here is what I&#8217;ve come up with.</p>
<p>At its simplest, a plot twist is something happening that the audience doesn&#8217;t expect.</p>
<p>A truly effective twist has to be two things:  1) unexpected and 2) still in keeping with your characters. It should also carry some emotional risk or baggage with it.</p>
<p>Let&#8217;s think about kidnapping, particularly as portrayed in television and then in the movies. In the typical hour-long TV drama, one of three things happens: the ransom drop is made and the person either is or is not recovered alive (that&#8217;s one and two) or the cops interfere with the ransom drop, catch the bad guys and recover the victim (three). None of these are twists, per se, because we&#8217;ve seen them so often that all are television clichés by now.  Twists would be hard to set up here because an hour in television terms isn&#8217;t long enough to set up expectations that would be betrayed by a twist &#8212; and, also, typically these are cop dramas, and kidnapping twists aren&#8217;t usually going to come from the cops. The characters who would do it &#8212; the suspects or the victims &#8212; aren&#8217;t well enough developed to take advantage of it, and the story isn&#8217;t usually told from their point of view.</p>
<p>Kidnapping in the movies is a different story. Twists are not only possible in this scenario, they&#8217;re practically <em>de rigeur</em> if you want anyone to go see your film. Here are a couple of examples:</p>
<p>In &#8220;Ransom,&#8221; Mel Gibson&#8217;s character turns the basic &#8220;kidnap, ransom, recovery&#8221; plot on its ear by offering the ransom to the public at large as a reward for turning in the kidnappers. The emotional risks are 1) living with himself if it is unsuccessful and his son dies and 2) his wife&#8217;s reaction &#8212; NOT good.  It&#8217;s in keeping with his character &#8212; he&#8217;s a self-made millionaire, so clearly he&#8217;s not afraid to take risks for large rewards. He lives large, and it&#8217;s a large gesture.</p>
<p>In  &#8220;Ruthless People,&#8221; Bette Midler is kidnapped by two completely inept criminals. When they contact her husband, played by Danny DeVito, with the ransom offer, the twist occurs &#8212; he doesn&#8217;t want her back. In fact, he wants them to dispatch her with, well, dispatch. The emotional baggage here is for the kidnappers &#8212; they&#8217;re screwed. They never intended to kill her, they&#8217;re just not that sort of people. But she&#8217;s being a bitch, so they don&#8217;t want to keep her either &#8212; and they clearly can&#8217;t let her go.</p>
<p>Some twists turn on a character&#8217;s identity. In &#8220;Sixth Sense&#8221; the twist is that Bruce Willis&#8217; character is dead the whole time. In the Wizard of Oz, the twist is that the wizard isn&#8217;t a wizard at all, that it&#8217;s all been one huge joke played by a quite ordinary, scared little man. In the Scarlet Pimpernel, it&#8217;s the fact that a completely useless fop turns out to be the Pimpernel &#8212; master strategist, cunning, skilled, daring, brave, useful. (If you want to stick with the original definition &#8212; something unexpected &#8212; the producers of &#8220;Robin Hood &#8212; Prince of Thieves&#8221; pulled off a beaut in the uncredited surprise appearance of Sean Connery as Richard II &#8212; and everyone in the theatre gasped when he came out.)</p>
<p>Twists often get associated with drama, but comedy can turn on them also. &#8220;Ruthless People&#8221; is a very funny movie. Another comedy that makes use of a twist is &#8220;The Marrying Man,&#8221; in which the main character marries the same woman four times. The twist is NOT that he marries her four times. That&#8217;s the plot. The twist is how he winds up married to her the first time (go watch the movie!).</p>
<p>Now, a twist can&#8217;t be just what allows the main character to survive, although that can be a side effect (the twist in &#8220;The Marrying Man&#8221; is an example). Survival is an accepted function of main characters in most fiction. So if your character ends up being chased by a knife-wielding maniac and somehow gets the knife away and stabs him instead, that generally won&#8217;t be considered a twist &#8212; because your main character is EXPECTED to survive, and twists have to be unexpected, remember?</p>
<p>A couple of points from Robert Kernen&#8217;s excellent book, &#8220;Building Better Plots,&#8221; spring to mind: the twist can&#8217;t be implausible or too wildly out there, because it not only won&#8217;t be believed, it will ruin your story. (And you could well come off looking like you wrote the whole book just to find a way to use that cute little twist you thought up, and your reader will feel used and be heartily irritated about it!) Kernen also advises that it&#8217;s better to put the twist just before the climax &#8212; as a catalyst to it &#8212; than have it be the climax itself. I think that&#8217;s good advice.</p>
<p>I can think of one instance where it came after the climax &#8212; in Gone with the Wind. To me, the climactic moment is when Scarlet realizes she doesn&#8217;t love Ashley, hasn&#8217;t for years. She really loves Rhett &#8212; and she can&#8217;t wait to tell him. She realizes how desperately <em>he</em> loves <em>her</em>. She rushes home to finally get her happily ever after &#8212; and discovers him packing to leave. He doesn&#8217;t love her anymore. (For years, every time I read that book, I&#8217;d stop one chapter shy of the ending because that upset me so much. I wanted her to have the happy ending.)</p>
<p>I can also think of one where the twist comes near the beginning, and sets up everything that comes after: &#8220;Prizzi&#8217;s Honor&#8221; &#8212; where Jack Nicholson&#8217;s character discovers the woman he&#8217;s intensely attracted to is, like himself, a hitman. (Hitperson?)</p>
<p>Something that doesn&#8217;t work, in my opinion: making the twist be that something <em>less</em> than what&#8217;s expected has actually occurred. Here&#8217;s a scenario, using the kidnapping theme again &#8212; only this time it&#8217;s a missing 4-year old. The kid is gone, and all the resources are mobilized, a beat-up old white van was seen leaving the area at the time he disappeared, a sex offender lives less than a mile away and drives a beat-up old white van, high drama throughout. Then it turns out the kid wasn&#8217;t kidnapped at all &#8212; he&#8217;d crawled up under the house and fallen asleep.</p>
<p>That&#8217;s not a twist, it&#8217;s a letdown. At a minimum, twists should be at the level of the drama that the reader expects, just not the specific action the reader expects. They can be used to ratchet the drama up a bit, but they shouldn&#8217;t be below its level, or reduce the entire plot to something below its current level.</p>
<p>How to come up with twists? Well, sometimes they just occur to you. Others you have to come up with. One way is to look at the &#8220;cliché&#8221; pattern of a story (Kidnap, ransom, recovery. Boy meets girl, boy loses girl, boy gets girl. Murder, tracking, capture. Poor girl, ball, glass slipper, prince. Love, betrayal, revenge. Goal, strive, achieve.). Pick an element, and ask some what-if questions.</p>
<p>What if, after all that, Cinderella turns the prince down? What if Oedipus was totally ok with the idea of sleeping with his mother?  What if someone turned down Brando&#8217;s offer that couldn&#8217;t be refused, and somehow got away with it? What if Little Red Riding Hood bargains with the wolf by giving him her little sister?</p>
<p>What if, indeed?</p>
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		<title>Still Here!</title>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 13 Oct 2007 22:18:30 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[I apologize for not posting for so long. It&#8217;s been for the best of all reasons &#8212; I&#8217;ve been writing. Since my 500 word a day goalsetting back in August, I&#8217;ve written 42,000 words of the new novel. By tonight it will be more than 43,000.
What there is to be said for writing quickly:
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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<div class='snap_preview'><br /><p>I apologize for not posting for so long. It&#8217;s been for the best of all reasons &#8212; I&#8217;ve been writing. Since my 500 word a day goalsetting back in August, I&#8217;ve written 42,000 words of the new novel. By tonight it will be more than 43,000.</p>
<p>What there is to be said for writing quickly:</p>
<p>• It develops a momentum of its own. The more you write, the more you want to write &#8212; sort of like that.</p>
<p>• I feel better. And I&#8217;m no longer irritated with myself for not writing when I know I should be (a perennial feeling for me for much of the last couple of decades).</p>
<p>• A sense of accomplishment. Like, wow, it&#8217;s been two months and the thing is nearly halfway written already!</p>
<p>• It&#8217;s on my mind so much that the ideas are coming thick and fast.</p>
<p>• It&#8217;s become a habit &#8212; I don&#8217;t have to remind myself that I need to write today.</p>
<p>• It&#8217;s easier to get started &#8212; I don&#8217; t have to put myself in the mindset of where I am in the book, because it hasn&#8217;t been long enough since I last wrote for it to get away from me. (This blog is another story&#8230;.)</p>
<p>• Best of all &#8212; it will be done soon, so I can start on the next thing!</p>
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		<title>Why Read Genre How-To Books?</title>
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		<description><![CDATA[I don&#8217;t write romances or mysteries or true crime or historical novels, but I have books about writing all these and more on my shelves, and I have read some of them and will read the rest. Why?
Romance novels are about exploring emotion, creating emotional tension, and creating and overcoming emotional obstacles. A well-written mystery [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<div class='snap_preview'><br /><p>I don&#8217;t write romances or mysteries or true crime or historical novels, but I have books about writing all these and more on my shelves, and I have read some of them and will read the rest. Why?</p>
<p>Romance novels are about exploring emotion, creating emotional tension, and creating and overcoming emotional obstacles. A well-written mystery is a study in suspense, foreshadowing, telling enough without telling all, and solving a problem. A well-written historical novel provides enough of the right kind of accurate detail to put you in the place without making you feel like you&#8217;re sitting in a classroom.</p>
<p>All of these are necessary skills for all fiction &#8212; and who better to learn them from than people whose writing depends on focusing on those specific things in particular and getting them right? I can&#8217;t think of anyone better to learn about writing authentic character emotion from than a romance writer whose publishing career depends largely on doing that one thing effectively.  Fill in the spaces in that sentence with the mystery-writer and historical-fiction-writer attributes, and you&#8217;ll have the rest of the point.</p>
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		<title>A Challenge &#8212; Putting a Value on Being Informed</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 18 Sep 2007 01:30:50 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[I am cross-posting here, and I initially started to say that this was going to be off-topic. But censorship cannot be off-topic to any writer &#8212; so I&#8217;ve reconsidered. Here goes:
Many of you know I just canceled my Hotmail account. I want to tell you why. Early in September, Hotmail stopped forwarding my subscription e-mails [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<div class='snap_preview'><br /><p>I am <a href="http://bucknakedpolitics.typepad.com/buck_naked_politics/2007/09/a-challenge-put.html" title="bnp value on being informed." target="_blank">cross-posting</a> here, and I initially started to say that this was going to be off-topic. But censorship cannot be off-topic to any writer &#8212; so I&#8217;ve reconsidered. Here goes:</p>
<p>Many of you know I just canceled my Hotmail account. I want to tell you why. Early in September, Hotmail stopped forwarding my subscription e-mails from Truthout.org. Note the use of the word “subscription” there — I CHOOSE to receive e-mails from Truthout and, despite the fact that I’m well past the age of majority and legally able to make my own choices, AND that this country allegedly enjoys freedom of speech, HOTMAIL unilaterally decided to call my subscription “spam” and stop forwarding it.</p>
<p>Mind you, it did NOT stop forwarding me “get your viagra here” e-mails, phony stock-scam e-mails, “easy russian bride” e-mails or a host of e-mails offering me advice on how to enlarge my penis. (For those of you who don’t know, I’m a woman.) THOSE aren’t considered spam, apparently.</p>
<p>But my e-mails from Truthout — which generally consist of links to stories from respected news outlets worldwide — apparently are. I’m not talking the Wack-Job Sun Times, here, people. I’m talking about the <a href="http://www.washingtonpost.com/">Washington Post</a>. <a href="http://www.nytimes.com/">The New York Times</a>. <a href="http://www.latimes.com/">The LA Times</a>. <a href="http://www.nola.com/">The New Orleans Times- Picayune</a>. <a href="http://www.miamiherald.com/">The Miami Herald</a>. <a href="http://www.reuters.com/">Reuters</a>. <a href="http://www.ap.org/">The Associated Press</a>. <a href="http://www.csmonitor.com/"> </a><a href="http://www.csmonitor.com/">The Christian Science Monitor</a>. A host of foreign news outlets.</p>
<p>I asked Hotmail to justify its actions and it quickly put the blame on Truthout. But it admitted to Truthout that it was “<a href="http://www.truthout.org/docs_2006/091307Z.shtml">blocking and throttling</a>” its e-mails. And it’s doing it to everyone who subscribes to Truthout from a Hotmail account, not just me. (There are also allegations that it’s doing it to the Independent Institute, but I don’t have confirmation on that.)<br />
And there are allegations that AOL is doing the same thing.</p>
<p>Guys, this is serious. Communication consists of a speaker, a listener, and a medium of transmission — be it spoken voice traveling through air or electrons passing over the Internet. Those who would control our access to information can’t stop me from listening, and they haven’t yet dared shut down the media outlets from investigating and writing, so they’re attacking the vulnerable link between. <font color="#ff0000"><strong><u>This is censorship</u>. <u>And it’s wrong.</u> </strong></font></p>
<p>Everyone, regardless of where they sit on the political spectrum, should be up in arms about this. The party in power in this country changes regularly. Our right to be informed by anyone we choose to listen to should not.</p>
<p>I CHALLENGE YOU TO DO WHAT I DID: Vote with your dollar. Ditch Hotmail. If you&#8217;re having the same trouble with AOL, ditch AOL. Tell them why. Donate what you would have spent on Hotmail or AOL to <a href="http://www.truthout.org/donations/">Truthout,</a> so they can continue their effort to put a stop to this censorship. More is at stake here than just Truthout — they’re small, non-corporate sponsored, and vulnerable, which makes them a good starting point. They’re also the place where this needs to end.</p>
<p>Cross-posted at <a href="http://bucknakedpolitics.typepad.com/buck_naked_politics/2007/09/a-challenge-put.html" title="bnp value on being informed." target="_blank">Buck Naked Politics</a></p>
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